Category: Writers Block
04/15/2007
Uncertainties
Written by Me
Where will this end
this winding road filled with uncertainties
will it be sincere, will it be true
Where does faith lead me?
Puzzled, misleading thoughts of confusion
Still wandering with emptiness
This never ending labyrinth
so drawn into your uncertain smile
So caught up at the moment
Will we last or drift apart?
Implicit words underlie truth and honesty
Would be felt but could never be said
Would stay but could never be expressed
It will be long before it fades away
hmm, its ok
A little random in composition, but a strong tone and a feeling with which I can very much sympathize. Nice work.
Yeah, this poem means so much to me. I wrote this one night when i was bored. it took me about twenty minutes, but i still continue to revise this one.
That's great. Save all of your drafts. A very awsum English teacher once told me, save everything. The good writing, the great writing, the craptastic writing. Everything can come in handy at one point. Maybe a poorly written thought from an old notebook can be reassessed and written better into a novel. Or, maybe you change something in a revision then want to go back and use part of what you took out. It's nice, so by all means clean it up a bit, but don't forget to keep all of your writings and drafts.